The marsupial is right, you should have some old sci-fi movie sound sample in there - personally I'd go for something a little morbid, a little twisted, to give the song a sinister edge. But that's just me. ;)
The ending is pretty good, but I'd suggest letting it fade out to silence instead of stopping part-way through. Maybe some other sci-fi movie quote right at the end, like in VNV Nation - Forsaken (Vocal Version). But all in all, I quite liked the song, it's damn good for your first try. Certainly better than anything I've come up with. :)
How easy would you say Techno Ejay is to use for someone like me, who hasn't had much experience with making music? I've been curious to make something, but free/shareware tracker software always seems very daunting to me.
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The ending is pretty good, but I'd suggest letting it fade out to silence instead of stopping part-way through. Maybe some other sci-fi movie quote right at the end, like in VNV Nation - Forsaken (Vocal Version). But all in all, I quite liked the song, it's damn good for your first try. Certainly better than anything I've come up with. :)
How easy would you say Techno Ejay is to use for someone like me, who hasn't had much experience with making music? I've been curious to make something, but free/shareware tracker software always seems very daunting to me.