ext_5890 (
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2003-05-16 11:09 am (UTC)
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You still need to add the obilgatory sampled quote from some old sci-fi movie. Something like, 'The system is down... The system is down...'.
Seriously, I liked it however I thought the ending was a bit abrupt. You need to 'wind the music down a bit' before ending it.
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Seriously, I liked it however I thought the ending was a bit abrupt. You need to 'wind the music down a bit' before ending it.